The Silent Aviator

7/10- Takes a while to "get", but pretty funny once you do get it.

Very nice! :) I know someone with a deviantart account;but his work pales in comparison.

I am not actually mad, you know. :D I feel speacal a girl got saved from rape on MY birthday. I am the BEST! :P :P :P :P so are ...

^8/10. Not too funny, but great in its own way.

Somewhat funny...

What am I listening to?Some cool techno song at Go there...

Welcome to YWS! Yes, video games rock.

If you're speaking of the 'R' content, I tweaked it slightly...hopefully its now up to specs.

Nice lyrics! Clear, understandable ,and has good rythm Now all you have to do is put them to some decent [not country !] music.

You are a crazy avocado and I know some pretty crazy ones. What the hell? how much sugar DID you consume today :) Do you write all of your stories ...

Ddaaammmnn... Nice poem! I wish I could write a longer review for this, but my knowledge of grammar/mechanics/petry is very limited. It doesn't take a grammar whiz to recognize a ...

Holy moly! :o You reallly know your military! God, you must never read anything else. If you only knew... :lol:

Hello... Welcome to the YWS! :) Anyways, kickass story. Very well written, axious to read any continuation s of it. I didn't find any grammarical errors, but grammar is definatley ...

Sorry. Accidentaly deleted the post.

She's a bit messy around the edges but im still half working on her. :) C'mon, Muse. "rough around the ages"? This work of art is amazing and kicks ass. ...